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essay 12312312312312, Essays (university) of International Management

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RMIT
Classifi
cation:
Truste
d
OMGT2279 - Transportation and Freight Logistics
January 2024
Assignment 2 – Written Report
Team 6
Points 16
Strengths - Giving enough information of the two ports, Hai Phong
and Shanghai with comparative tables and figures for
better understanding.
- Detailed recognition of the challenges of the two ports
with specific numbers.
Areas for
improvemen
t
- Should proof-read the file for any typos before
submission.
- The “Comparative analysis” in the Port Facility section is
not considered to be an analysis. This is too short and
does not give enough information or any insights with
only 2 sentences.
- You have mentioned “technology integration” in the
Executive summary as the recommendation, but in the
report did not include that information.
- “The railway line has deteriorated, many sections of the
road are damaged, making it difficult to transport goods.
Equipment for loading, unloading and offloading goods on
the railway is limited and cannot meet current freight
transport needs. Please include the sources for this
two information. If possible, give more information the
information about the limitation in equipment.
- The recommendation of “Creating a mandatory truck
retirement program” should be re-considered with
multiple factors. Because the given examples of Los
Angeles and Long Beach ports may not have enough
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RMIT Classifi cation: Truste OMGT2279 - Transportation and Freight Logistics d January 2024 Assignment 2 – Written Report Team 6 Points 16 Strengths - Giving enough information of the two ports, Hai Phong and Shanghai with comparative tables and figures for better understanding.

  • Detailed recognition of the challenges of the two ports with specific numbers. Areas for improvemen t
  • Should proof-read the file for any typos before submission.
  • The “Comparative analysis” in the Port Facility section is not considered to be an analysis. This is too short and does not give enough information or any insights with only 2 sentences.
  • You have mentioned “technology integration” in the Executive summary as the recommendation, but in the report did not include that information.
  • “The railway line has deteriorated, many sections of the road are damaged, making it difficult to transport goods. Equipment for loading, unloading and offloading goods on the railway is limited and cannot meet current freight transport needs.”  Please include the sources for this two information. If possible, give more information the information about the limitation in equipment.
  • The recommendation of “ Creating a mandatory truck retirement program” should be re-considered with multiple factors. Because the given examples of Los Angeles and Long Beach ports may not have enough

RMIT Classifi cation: Truste similarities to be chosen as recommendation. d

  • The recommendations for Shanghai port were poorly written. Each of the four recommendations should be extended with specific information about the method provided such as the sources, how it operates, etc.
  • You have mentioned the shortage of personnel in Shanghai port in the challenges. However, the recommendations did not address that.